Black Poetry : Sometimes

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  1. LadyBelle

    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes like now I cry

    Sometimes my sorrow is so deep
    Sometimes I wish
    I could trade in today
    Sometimes tomorrow is worst
    Than the day before
    Sometimes I think my prayers go
    And returned unanswered
    Sometimes I fall and don’t want to get up
    Sometimes I don’t like what I see in me
    And I know
    Sometimes He just wants us to trust
    Thank you Father
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    And sometime i just learn
    how to walk again
    stand up and move from within
    sometime i can't see light
    but i pray each and every night
    what seem unheard is heard
    clear
    and the new me awaken dear
    sometime i just have to trust
    to get me pass this deep rush
    shhhhhh! hush now !
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes people believe

    your prayers are ALWAYS answered

    have faith

    i feel your message

    you must keeping pushing regardless of the odds

    to give up is to die a slow death

    to stand up live brings strength and appreciation

    peace poet
     
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    Sometimes, yes it's just that way. We want to know if we are indeed heard, so hard to remember that we always are. Feeling this more than you know poetess.
     
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    if it didn't feel like that from time to time then it wouldn't be life
    life's a beautiful struggle and it has its ups and downs but its always worth it
     
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    Hello LadyBelle...

    :wave:
    We all go through our own kind of “sometimes” phase.
    The important thing is not to allow ourselves to rest there for too long.
    A good way not to do so is to feed from the happier, pleasant aspect of our lives.
    Like family, friends and God. I enjoy the variety of your gift!


    Be Blessed!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    LadyBelle - There is a balance that seems to be needed in the affairs of Mankind. We must have our "Sometimes" which are few, so that we may have our "Other Times" which are many. Somewhere in between is Living. Love the craft of your words. Namyh
     
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    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Harry Hyman. Thank you, that was said beautifully. Sometimes just expressing yourself.....so you can be heard brings great relief. I appreciate you.
     
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