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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Jan 28, 2008.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Sometimes tears are happy
    And
    Sometimes clouds don't bring rain
    And
    Sometimes pain is happiness
    And
    Sometimes happiness is pain

    Sometimes words are meaningless
    And
    Sometimes a message subtle
    And
    Sometimes they say that good means bad
    And
    Sometimes good means trouble


    Sometimes hope means giving up
    And
    Sometimes holding on means letting go
    And
    Sometimes rich means spiritual poverty
    And
    Sometimes poor just means needs to grow

    Sometimes it's just not time to fully understand...
    And
    Sometimes the only thing that makes sense
    Is
    Putting the whole world in His hands.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sis
    sometimes we fight
    against his plans,
    and sometimes
    we don't even know it.
    we doing it.
    Yet in the end
    we are in his hands, we always been
    in his hands
    awesome flow sis

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    The yin and yang of the world, sometimes falls upon our shoulders. Yes, in the end we've got to give it up to God. Your expression is wonderful.
     
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    Let go and let God ... this poem has a powerful meaning to it for me. notice how we try and try and things go wrong but if you give it to God thenthe road gets clear for our path to walk...i enjoyed your poem.
     
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    well written and felt as i bath inside the sometime world dat i'm in today !
    I give praise unto him
     
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    skuderjaymes Contextualizer Synthesizer MEMBER

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    wow wow wow wow wow.. you probably already know but, you are something special.. really.. I might have to pick up my guitar..
     
  7. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    You are very special and unique yourself!!!

    Man I was in LA for 6 months.... a guitar, the setting sun and spoken word... man I can see that... raincheck!!!!

    and many humble thanks!!!
     
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