Black Poetry : Sometimes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Sep 29, 2007.

  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    well u know sometime a change is in order to betterment
    and sometime moving on can be painful but deeper inside
    we find it all not that bad at all just was time to change ...
     
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    A broken heart aches so badly, no matter how it's caused. We eventually get through to see the other side, but the journey is heinous. I felt the ache in your words, So'ja. Well written piece.
     
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    yeah i feel u bruh...
    sometimes the past is too big a beast to forget....
    and sometimes it aint...nice piece son..

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Nice!


    Even though we can never go back to what once was, it's still nice to look back, sometimes, and smile.
     
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    Sometimes We

    Sometimes we don't realize.....
    the heart...
    knows that breaking is a part ...
    the journey form the start!


    All the hard is before the soft...
    when it's squeezed or cracked...
    you won't have to ask...
    where the peace or praise at.

    Flower petals falling in the space of time...
    close your eyes capture the smell....
    of reassurance of an acient grind!

    The call...(((((((((((((Ring)))))))))))....
    Poetry and Love....
    in Life ....if u believe...
    supports all thangs!

    Return My Heart in Chest!

    Sometimes We don't have faith
    in the love we give...
    it can never go away...
    just stored @ will!


    Peace!


    I hope you don't mind!...DSS? Instead a pout in poetry I am able to let it out!

    Tkxs for the inspiration
     
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    Sometimes, I get so fed up with being a poet. Having more emotions and love in my heart than I know what to do with. It's a painful thing when those feelings are not reciprocated . And worse when no one seems to understand what I'm saying or how I'm feeling. Then I read a write like this, and though I am not happy to learn that you may have been feeling some of the feelings that I have felt. It's nice to know that I am not alone, in my love, my yearning ,my pain and my loneliness. Thank you Poet for not just sharing your thoughts, but for sharing this world with me.

    Bless up poet! Write on!
     
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    thats a black man for ya lol
    slide a joke in tryin to get a smile out of it
    i cant stand that cause I be tryin to stay angry smh lol
    this was a different side of you brother DSS
    props :)
     
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