Black Poetry : Sometimes

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  1. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes I wish all I felt for you was lust
    I wish sometimes
    All I wanted from you was to pull you towards me and
    kiss you lightly on your neck and ears with just a little bit of tongue
    gently circling around where the peach fuzz gathers from your hairline.
    I wish sometimes all I wanted from you was to hug you from behind with my arms meeting around your strong ness and strength, just below your nipples but above your navel, but leading down to that ripe banana... to what I really want and need from you.

    Sometimes I wish all I felt for you was lust
    I wish sometimes
    All I wanted from you was to pull you close to me
    facing you so close that all I can feel is your breath and we move closer and closer until we are breathing the same air....
    Just as our lips begin to part and our tongues begin to meet in the kiss I wish you were leading this instead of me, and you wouldn't take that side step to the right to avoid the kiss and the embrace.
    I wish sometimes all I wanted from you was for you to handle the dampness gathering between my thighs you know stop that river from flowing and only being caught by the crotch of those damned cotton thongs when we do that hug thang or when we kiss or give those unnoticeable glances from across the room.

    I wish sometimes
    All I wanted from you was to listen to you moan my name and grab the sheets when I do my tap dance on your stick or drop it likes it hot til you can't handle no more for the first round, give you a break and start round two

    I wish sometimes all I felt for you was lust
    I wish sometimes all I wanted from you was to watch you try and walk away with your stick at attention and you trying to hide it, by doing the I'm about to pee dance to the bathroom, knowing I am waiting for you to invade my space and feel the river with me as it flows all over the place

    Sometimes I wish all I felt for you was lust
    Then I would not spending countless hours in the day waiting to see your smiling face hoping that my face is as fulfilling to you as yours is to me
    If I only lusted after you
    Then I would not experience every pain every hurt every frustration every down moment you allow me to feel and share with you
    If I only lusted after you
    I would not pace around like a child waiting for Santa Claus to bring the toys every time you would call or email and say you are on the way or we have a "date"
    If I only lusted after you I would be able
    to dream about my own dreams coming true instead of dreaming if your dreams are coming true
    If I only lusted after you
    I would never have had this wonderful experience of loving you.
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    INTREPID...

    This is awesome. I know how you feel, Sometimes if it could just be something else and not what it really is. I am so diggn' this flo.
    FLO ON POET!!!
    Much Luv
     
  3. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the love
    4EVERLUV
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa i wish i could ......sometime too ..........tyte flow
     
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    hey sister,..
    **** have you been readin my thougts as well?
    Nice to know im not alone in the immersion of self in a nother
    Welcome back...
    much love as always!:terrific:
     
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    love the flo poet flo on.
     
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    sweet flow:luvv:
     
  8. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the love
    It is so nice to be back home
    and to also put the pen and paper and my mind to work again
    Thanks again family
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a very beautiful poem


    Sometimes I wish all I felt for you was lust

    i was definitely feeling this line
     
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    Thank you family for all the love on this piece. It was my I am home flow.....lol
     
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