Black Poetry : sometimes...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes
    i'm lost in wanderment
    ...mind traipesing {sp} in and out of foul ****
    racing to meet nothing
    at the doorway of something less.

    hmmm.

    sometimes...
    i'm torn, here and there
    over foolish fools who don't even care
    when
    why
    who
    or where
    and all i can think is
    this **** ain't fair

    sometimes
    with closed eyes, i see most clear
    and wonder why you aren't sincere
    when "I love you" rolls across your lips
    i see satiny silk caressing beautiful hips
    it's all i can do to curve these tears
    and corrall the depths of all my fears
    coz when i think of losing you
    my mind regress...my heart screams...NOOOOoooooooo!

    sometimes.
     
  2. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    somtimes...

    we wonder what is it worth...
    how can it be...
    when will it be...
    and why people say the
    words that mean so much...
    cut so deep when...well, you know the rest...

    ~thinking & wondering~
     
  3. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AMEN

    [SIZE=huge]Brotha, B
    I can feel this
    like you wouldn't
    believe.
    *Lovin' the
    reality, exudin'
    from this piece {peace}*
    [/SIZE]
     
  4. SuNNiOne

    SuNNiOne Active Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes. It's just like that my Brotha.
    This was very very nice. I enjoyed the read.
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i do believe
    every poet has a
    sometimes piece
    and this heah
    is str8 wit me!!!
    diggin it.
    -7:spinstar:
     
  6. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tYGHT B !

    iNSIGHTFUL...EXCELLENT DROP POET.

    PEACE
    G-MAN
     
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