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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Keita Kenyatta, Apr 1, 2004.

  1. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    copyright2005
     
  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brutha Keita

    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WoW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This poem was really fantastic...I loved every bit.
    I'm glad I peeped this one out because it is a masterpiece :wink:
    Nita
    :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we just don't know why
    sometime we fine self wodering
    sometime i tell u
    felt dis from within tyte scribe dis was indeed on the money
     
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    Sometimes...we got to ...do what we do,
    and sometimes our love just can't be true.

    Do to me...what you want done to you...
    then neither of us ever...have to be blue. :crying:

    The man at the store...just want to be paid, :smokin:
    but I am your wife...and I need to be laid. :huh:

    Laid me with tenderness...wrap me in gold,
    together we'll search for...what's not been...unfoled. :wink:

    Love and respect me...like I know you can do, :spin:
    and tonight when the lights out...I'll cuddle you Boo. :love:

    that was a very nice piece...not because of who you are...but because of how you are.

    Love you to the limit...your other half :love:
     
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    that sometimes
    i feel ya on this one
    thanks for sharing this one
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life can put us between a rock and a hard place, sometimes. Liked this flow.
     
  7. ThePoet

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    daaaaaaaaaaaaaang....that poem's dope.

     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very thought invoking piece/peace my brotha and sista Queen that was a lovely response :heart: :)
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes we just don't know
    about tomorrow
    flow on
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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