Black Poetry : Sometimes...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, Apr 8, 2003.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you make me laugh with everything you do
    Sometimes you make me cry
    Cuz everything you say ain't true
    Sometimes you give me a reason
    To just keep on living
    Sometimes you just keep taking
    While I foolishly keep giving
    Sometimes I just wanna **** you
    Don't wanna talk, just feel
    Sometimes I just wanna talk
    Cuz you simply keep it real
    Sometimes If I don't catch myself
    I'll fall in love too deep
    Sometimes you piss me the **** off
    Anger lures me to sleep
    Sometimes I just wanna love you
    And forget everything you've done
    Sometimes I want to kill you
    Send your *** to Hell where you came from
    Sometimes I can't believe
    Out of all the girls you chose me
    Sometimes I think I never should've
    Let the sex get the best of me
     
  2. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmmmmmmmm sounds like somebody has man issues...join the club! Nice to have u at Destee's.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's beautiful when u see he as who u wish
    and yes sometime we get in the web of str8 lovin'
    nice flow welcome to destee's
     
  4. Dee

    Dee Active Member MEMBER

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    I can relate......Reminds me of some stuff I went thru with someone that I fell in love with before I had a chance to catch myself! I like!!!!
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    giiiiiiiiiiiiiirrrrrrrrrrrrrlllllllll I LUV THIS no more needed to say :)
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think you are well on your way to being a wonderful woman!
    plus you' gon' make some youngin happy!
    feelin yo' flow!
     
  7. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey look! iit's my first piece :) Thank you everybody :) :wave:
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so good, i can relate so much...
     
  9. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow.....great piece
     
  10. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    send your *** back to Hell where you came from

    lol i like this, it was tyte as hell, keep em comin...
     
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