Black Poetry : sometimes when i drink...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Nov 3, 2003.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it helps when i'm depressed--

    i can't help that i repressed--
    all the grief and
    stress--
    creating this abcess--
    in my scrawny chest--
    i be left to guess--

    what's the real--
    meaning of me breathing--?

    it be seeming like i'm
    reaching for--

    hard mirages--
    that rub me raw--

    so introspection gets the best of me when i--
    sit and sip hennessy
    and coke--
    chasers depend on what life throws me--

    it ususally pitches like Josh beckett in game--6
    of the world series--
    i'm shut out out and can't--
    get

    where i need to be
    (where is that?)

    with peace of mind--
    on the side of happiness--
    while loving destiny's smile --

    truth fully
    i be me
    and nothing more--

    life hands me lemonade
    i accept it--
    with sauza--

    (bottoms up)


    i'm not an alkie...i promise--



    thepoetsean
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice flow. Keep your sense, and frame. Not drowned in the grain. You will be OK. Nothing wrong with a drink. I know, but if it makes you wonder longer in the negative. Don't. If you have some thoughts that you need to work out. Continue to do so. Self love, brings love from others. Keep flowing Poet

     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    with me...

    its like I dont seem to be depressed until after i drink. I could be so [email protected] happy, but once i get drunk i get madd depressed lol. thats why MY @ss dont drink... well not that much. nice flow tho.
     
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    yo i like this what a way to define
    when ya drink...
    nice flow... :angel1:

    so introspection gets the best of me when i--
    sit and sip hennessy
    and coke--(sounds like some lets get it on.... a biggy flow)
     
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