Black Poetry : sometimes vs. always

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes we argue over the most petty things
    and silent treatment sits between us at the table...

    sometimes we say things we shouldn't say
    last night i wanted to take you by the hands and pray
    but i couldn't

    sometimes i feel the flame is gone
    and by the breath of blame it was blown..
    but i'm willing to take it

    sometimes i feel we won't last
    but as i think of the past.....


    i thank my God for you always from sun rays to rainy days
    you're my wisdom, queen, my all
    God catch us before we fall

    you were and still am my friend -always and forever
    for only... ONLY love has kept us together, anchoring us
    in this everdrifting weather
    and seasons

    i'll always have more reasons than sometimes could ever conjure.

    that day you said "i love you" will always remain
    in the main sections of my brain
    that day freed you and i from pain

    and now i want to relive that day
    i'd exchange all i have if we would give that day a chance
    and i want to start with a slow dance
    so please..
    take my hand

    "sometimes" we have to remember "always".
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hellyeah!!

    man u flowe this like a master !
    sometyme we often forget
    and always getting lost
    what a thin line !!
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Moving piece!

    Just read some of these poems to her and you might be surprised at the response. I think you are absolutely marvelous with the poetic flow of love! Not just romantic love either.
    That real kind! Peace and Love! Blessings on Ya House:peace:
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    jh check your pm

    *taking your hand*

    pd
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$,

    you said it potna :toast: . it's easy to get lost in the sometimes sauce
    thanx for the read.
    a fan for life.

    mslusciousb,
    it ain't nothing personal about me, but i sampled it before.
    i'm honored by your luscious words.
    your fan for life.
    blessings bestowed on you and your house (back atcha ma)

    pd,
    aight.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Duly noted!!!!!!

    I am honored dear scribe , that you also subscribe to my poetic
    vibe so I do believe we be in a mutual admiration society!
    Keep it flowing, for those who are not knowing!
    :D
     
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