Black Poetry : sometimes love hurts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Aug 3, 2001.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    piercing the inner thoughts
    of my mind feelings dwell
    emotions quell
    sheltering themselves
    like hail

    huge forms of ice
    that swell
    clouding the memory
    in how love used to be

    involving pure fantasy
    making love reality
    with you lying next to me

    here
    where you need to be
    close to my heart

    fueling destiny
    inside of me

    reaching the highest
    levels of intimacy

    yet your not here
    presently to fulfill
    what is aching me

    your love
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pd

    Clean & precisely written .... felt it!
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PeeDidDee...


    ...the title of this piece... is true indeed!

    & love ain't supposed to hurt!!... but
    when it does... it's felt deeply! i was
    all ova dis one! its wonderfully written!

    One.
    SunShyne~
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, poetess, you are so right. sometimes it does hurt. very well written, ma friend. keep on scribin'...i'm lovin' it!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetic

    I've often wondered how something that felt so good can hurt so badly. I'm feeling this. Thanks.

    Mad Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN
     
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