Black Poetry : Sometimes it seems

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blush: Sometimes it seems
    I cant get enough of you
    as we grow together
    My loves flows and it gets
    Stronger each day…..
    Living in a dream
    But my love is true….
    Funny….
    Use to dream of fairy tales
    And now I am living one
    So sweet the rapture
    I am in a big empty house
    Yearning for the love…..
    And you walk in and took my
    Hand….
    Just like a Prince
    from a far off dream……
    never to far…..
    for when I call your name…
    you’re here….. :kiss:
    Sometimes it seems
    I cant get enough of you
    Lonely I use to be
    Before you enter in my life
    And I had no clue we would
    Be…..not fearing not even
    Asking why…..
    The loves grows and
    the bond gets stronger
    Each second of the
    minute within the hour
    Of each day…I just want to say
    I love you…….. my dear one
    I must take time to say….
    Thank you for you for loving me
    and being in my life…
    But…..sometimes it seems
    I cant get enough of you
    as we grow together…… :love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dat's beautiful to da one whom hold heart
    keep flowing i be love it when down in the
    deep flowz outward .....very nicely written
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich...i am glad u likes.... :rolling:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome dis was all good
     
  5. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love how all your pieces just flow. you always do a lovely job.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You never know what might become of a fairy tale, I like the flow of this.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankz rich again for all your support and love on dis......

    phenomenalwoman..glad you enjoy..thanks for the read

    watzinaname..never know until it unfolds....thanks

    Peace yall
    Angel
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's a beautiful piece. keep 'em comin' my eyes are open.

    blak
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwww...angel and Love such a blissful result :)
     
  10. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Isn't love a wonderful thing? ...you can't fight it...you can't hide it...and you [email protected] sure can't ignore it, and you're far to beautiful (inner) not to give and accept it. When you are in a big house, it's just a house...when LOVE is shared by two...it becomes a HOME.

    here's a :toast: to love...


    queentswana
     
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