Black Poetry : Sometimes I'm Lonely

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've come to be with you
    Because I needed to
    Sometimes,

    I'm lonely...

    To cuddle up with you
    That's something
    I can do,
    My one and only ~

    Someone is lonely too
    In search of "I love you"
    Tired of being used
    What else could I conclude?

    Lonely day and night
    I roam by satellite
    Although our star
    Shines bright
    We orbit,
    Out of sight

    Inspired,
    Words I write
    Hold on to you real tight
    To get me through a night
    Afraid, that love might die

    I've come to be with you
    Because I needed to
    Sometimes,

    I'm lonely...


    Darryl Abdu Omari :thanks:
    aka 1poetsought copyright 2004
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice poet
    what i like in feel about your flow
    is how honest and open you are
    stright from the heart
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank's Blue, you do it for me.
     
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    very well written i can feel this flow
    indeed wow very well posed
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We've all been here, and your words described this emptiness, and darn near desperation so well.
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can surely relate to and respect that kind of openess...and you will go far, because you're real...diggin where you took this.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kinda reminds me of that Janet Jackson lyric from her song "Lonely" :

    feelin so alone and deserted
    with people standin all around you

    I feel this poem, and I also appreciate the honesty. One love
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It means so much to be heard, thanks.
     
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    feld this ...









    Lovelibertylady
     
  10. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one lonely moment can last a lifetime- definitely feelin this flow- well done, artist.
    peacebeme-MsDy
     
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