Black Poetry : Sometimes I Wonder

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Jul 2, 2001.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    may i take the love of poeticd...

    free her of life's negativity
    wrap her in the security of a warm embrace
    freely giving of self...to her...face to face

    may i show her true love
    so that she nolonger wonder
    bury past loves
    and the pain, i'll put asunder

    let the kiss of the sun
    spread a smile across her face
    when love's appetizer come
    let her know how it taste

    there's a knock...knock at the door
    in the form of destiny
    granting smiles...free of charge
    and giving directions to ecstasy

    open your door and let him in
    allow this bearer of love to be
    in your heart and mind and soul
    sharing your world for eternity.

    WONDER NO MORE.

    nice flow, pd.

    One.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite nyce, dear poetess and the piece that followed, as well. very nicely done.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    PD

    this is what i'm talking about

    loving the flow, hea

    yes yes yes
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Refreshingly sweet

    I really dug this one poetic...

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    baller, reas, and lister

    thanx :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I JUST

    LOVED EVERY MOMENT EVERY WORD
    SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL:toast: :heart: :kiss:
     
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