Black Poetry : Sometimes I Wonder

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  1. TwanaMosley

    TwanaMosley Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes I Wonder...if the words you say are true.
    when you say you love me do you really mean you love "YOU"
    Sometimes I Wonder if you've changed or continued to remain the same...
    The same man who was unfaithful
    making babies left and right.
    The same man who "HAD" to go clubing
    each and every single Friday and Saturday night
    The same man who would never stay still
    and was always on the go
    The same man who was afaid to let his true feelings
    and love show


    Sometimes I Wonder...if you really love me and if you really care
    In the past you've hurt and mistreated me that I can't even bare
    to go through the same thing again
    I couldn't even begin
    to tell you how fed up I am withbeing abused and misused
    not only by you but also by a few brothas in mny past
    So I hope when you get out of prision, you would have been done making a decision as to if this relationship will last
    No more games,no more lies
    No more unfaithfullness,no more cries
    No more creeping while I'm sleeping in our bed alone
    No prank calls or unidentified numbers on my phone from
    the girls you done boned
    No more Freak Neaks in the summer
    No more picking and chosing who you spend your time with
    It's either me or Stunna
    No more hustling in the streets
    Bay' you need a real job, a steady job
    you got mouths to fed.

    I could go on and on with the list of no, no's but I think you get the point
    Everyone makes mistakes
    I'd admit I'm not always on point.

    We've been together almost three years now and I would like to put the past behind us
    But it seems to creep up every now and then and temporarily blind us
    from all that we've been through together the good and the bad
    The love that we share for one another
    despite all the rough day we've had
    The child God has blessed us with that we created out of love
    she needs us now more than ever
    To shape and to mold her
    to prepare her for the life ahead of her for when she gets older

    I've been waiting patiently and impatiently going on a year now for when you return home

    Sometimes I wonder if my waiting will be in vain
    and if I should have moved on

    But when I wonder thoughts like these my mind I put to rest
    for I know that within my heart that these are just tests

    Tests of my ability, my willingness and strength to carry on
    But bay' believe me when I say that these are the test I will continue to pass till you come home.


    Sometimes I Wonder...
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well posed likes the write indeed
    feel it to
    welcome to the family
    enjoy and flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW

    THIS IS A NICE DROP!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!
    KEEP IT COMING!!!!
    :thanks:
     
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    Sometimes I wish I could breifly
    look into the future and see
    the path ahead.
    Nice drop! I feel ya!
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to the family brotha...nice to have u here....
    :heart:
    -story
     
  6. TwanaMosley

    TwanaMosley Member MEMBER

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    Thanks everyone!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very heart felt scribe u pose reality questions
    hearts ask daily tyte flow
    welcome within to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to a lovin family u found as i bless u
    some love from above .....flow on !
     
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