Black Poetry : Sometimes I Forget

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Mar 10, 2012.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really do appreciate how you always beautifully bring us back to what we need to know & certainly how it makes you feel!
     
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    Thanks, Sis. I just want him to understand that he is genuinely cherished and loved. Oh, I do feel.
     
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    that is some stroooonnnng love there.
     
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    skuderjaymes Contextualizer Synthesizer MEMBER

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    Kiwanda,

    I think you have finally crossed that bridge to communicating your own particular richness and warmth in a longer free-er Form.. How does it feel?
     
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    Watch out now Ms. Vera, I'm starting to fall in love with you. :hearts1:
    Thank you.

    (smile)
     
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    Like love, James. Like love.

    If my longer form is evolving it is in part because of you. And no, I am not trying to placate you or stroke your ego. It's the honest to goodness truth. You know how much I value your artistic worth. Most times before I write I play your voice and your words of encouragement in my head, put the earphones on...and well...you know the rest. It doesn't hurt that I am truly feeling someone, either. (smile)

    I have yet to write passed my comfort zone, though. Sometimes I feel the best stanzas for some of my work are the ones I refused to write. I will work on that.


    Thank you, James.
    Sincerely
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    Kiwanda
     
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    :11900: *blushing*
     
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