Black Poetry : Sometimes I don't Make Sense

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes I don't make sense
    When I know exactly what I want to say

    Sometimes I mispell
    My words when
    I get this way

    Sometimes
    I'm not able
    To express the way I feel

    But I hope
    You know
    Exactly
    What I mean

    Sometimes I don't make sense
    Although I try

    And people wonder about me
    Guess I'm kinda shy

    To say what's on my heart
    And make my voice renound

    Sometimes the words
    Escape my mouth
    Before I touch
    The keys and press

    Sometimes I do make sense
    And that scares me a lot

    That I actually feel or sound
    Intelligent at the moment in time

    It just pours out of me so easily
    And rages inside of me

    It comes oozing
    From my grip

    Involuntarily
    And it just comes
    Magnetically
    And this confuses me

    From time to time
    To not be in control
    Of my rythme

    Or my flow
    It varies
    On what I know

    So don't be surprised
    If I don't spell a word right
    The first time or second time or third time
    Or even fourth time

    Or my words don't seem to come together
    I'm not perfect
    I know
    And sometimes I don't make sense
    But I feel it in my soul.

    Desert Storm
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and that's all that matters...

    who really cares about making sense or spelling words correctly? the heartfelt intent is always conveyed and felt!

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    Heyyyyyyyyy!!!!!! Dyme !!!! YOu from Oakland too? I just moved to Stockton last August I hate it here but I miss the Bay sooooo much Brotha where you from? I moved from 98th and McArthur!!!!! Wow. What small world.
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fa sheezee...

    well actually im from las vegas...but i've been in oakland for 10 years. We live in Upper Rockridge. I have family that lives on 98th and a sis on Fruitvale! LORD LORD LORD why did u choose stockton? LOL! one of my best friends lives there and i hate going to visit...its hot and BOOOOOORING! well now ya know where i be at! :)

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