Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Jul 21, 2001.
Sometimes I Cry
Beautiful peace poet....
I loved the use of repetition with the phrase "Sometimes I cry"....this really lends rhythm and harmony to the piece.
Thank-you for sharing this one
so good to read you again
so good to see you back in the house
such a beautiful peace you've shared with us
It's good to be back Destee
I have been so busy, having made the move from Texas to
Florida. Since I am originally from Florida, you can imagine how I must feel, to be back in again,
after having lived in Texas for four years. As you know personally, the beaches are gorgeous here. Two nights a week, I go to the pier and meditate, while my son concentrates on catching a speckled trout. The sunsets and the full moon nights are so soothing to my soul.
It took me about a month to get online, AFTER we found a place to live. Thus, I have not been able to be a frequent visitor of the most beautifully designed forum on the net.
It's good to see Dnommno (is dat spelled right?) sharing those golden nuggets of wisdom again. I read his July 7 post earlier this morning. It's was a blessing that took me back to my own personal struggles with submission.
*Glad Ta Be Back In Cinch*
JOYCE YA BEEN MADLY MISSED
WELL WRITTEN AND A BEAUTIFUL DISPLAY
OF LOVE FORTH U R AS U BE ........I LOVED IT.
your words ring out like poetic 's.o.s.'...(Sounds Of -the-Spirit)...and I feel you. Because Love Divine is so good and yes 'sometimes, I cry'.
This is peace for me, thank you for sharing
Joyce, this piece is simply beautiful...I must say, that it is truly good to read you again, dear poetess. Looking forward to reading more from you.
Welcome back and thanks for the read....it's a pleasure to see you back home. I shall tell my first love"Wisdom" you said hello...
but you know each other so well...
I never took time to say thank yall. This was an oversight on my part...sorry.
i'm almost mad that i missed this one!
i'm glad you decided to thank those who
replied before me... or i wouldn't have been
afforded the opportunity to experience the
pure beauty of your words!!
thank you for sharing!!
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