Black Poetry : Sometimes I Cry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Jul 21, 2001.

  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful peace poet....

    I loved the use of repetition with the phrase "Sometimes I cry"....this really lends rhythm and harmony to the piece.
    Thank-you for sharing this one

    *tears*
     
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    Haaaaaaay Joyce :wave:

    so good to read you again
    so good to see you back in the house
    such a beautiful peace you've shared with us
    thank you

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's good to be back Destee

    I have been so busy, having made the move from Texas to
    Florida. Since I am originally from Florida, you can imagine how I must feel, to be back in again,
    after having lived in Texas for four years. As you know personally, the beaches are gorgeous here. Two nights a week, I go to the pier and meditate, while my son concentrates on catching a speckled trout. The sunsets and the full moon nights are so soothing to my soul.

    It took me about a month to get online, AFTER we found a place to live. Thus, I have not been able to be a frequent visitor of the most beautifully designed forum on the net.

    It's good to see Dnommno (is dat spelled right?) sharing those golden nuggets of wisdom again. I read his July 7 post earlier this morning. It's was a blessing that took me back to my own personal struggles with submission.

    *Glad Ta Be Back In Cinch*

    Joyce
     
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    HELLO !!

    JOYCE YA BEEN MADLY MISSED
    WELL WRITTEN AND A BEAUTIFUL DISPLAY
    OF LOVE FORTH U R AS U BE ........I LOVED IT.:D :heart:
     
  6. alyce

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    Joyce

    your words ring out like poetic 's.o.s.'...(Sounds Of -the-Spirit)...and I feel you. Because Love Divine is so good and yes 'sometimes, I cry'.

    This is peace for me, thank you for sharing

    a
     
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    Joyce, this piece is simply beautiful...I must say, that it is truly good to read you again, dear poetess. Looking forward to reading more from you.
     
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    Welcome back and thanks for the read....it's a pleasure to see you back home. I shall tell my first love"Wisdom" you said hello...

    but you know each other so well...
     
  9. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I never took time to say thank yall. This was an oversight on my part...sorry.
     
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    sista j.


    i'm almost mad that i missed this one! :)

    i'm glad you decided to thank those who
    replied before me... or i wouldn't have been
    afforded the opportunity to experience the
    pure beauty of your words!!

    thank you for sharing!!

    itsallLove, chile!!

    elayne.
     
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