Black Poetry : Somethings Killing me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Nov 4, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sit here smoking what I like to be token. Breathing it in. Blowing circles. Thinking. Sometimes drinking when I do. Trouble circling around me, I don't care cause I'm smoking. Started this thing sometime ago. I really don't want to stop. It's addictive. It calls my wallet and I have to buy it sometimes. I share the pain with my friends. I pass them around and smoke them to the end. Of time. Choking never... taking it in what ever. Oh it bothers you, what can I say. I don't want to go outside. It's my vise, taking to the heights of my indulgence. Puff, puff... sometimes it's not enough. I start over. Sometimes it makes me high. I know I'm destined to die. So let me choke. Smoke what I wrote in that letter. It says so on the side. Take this thang in stride. Cigarettes kill.

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  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like the flow of this..
    good message too....:angel1:
     
  3. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight piece, brother King
     
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    for real
    nice mesage
    in this scribe
    good point
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    smoke free u laid it down a billboard message
     
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    HODEE don done it again,
    bust out a flow,
    and let em know it's a sin.
    keep on puffin',
    if you know what the conclusion will be,
    fly away like a puffin.
    lovin yo flow,
    and for the folks that don't know,
    puff puff give then blow.........
     
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