Black Poetry : Something

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jan 25, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to tell you something
    Tell you how I feel
    Something perhaps you've never heard before
    Something exciting
    Something real

    Something that will make you smile
    Something putting you in top of the world
    Making you feel like a woman in love
    Say something only you and I know of

    I want to say something
    Even if it's something you already know
    Saying it often
    In different ways
    Can only help our love to grow

    Something will come to mind
    I'll say it with love
    I'll say it with pride
    You are everything to me
    Something wonderful
    I feel inside

    BE
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartbeat

    Wonderful Piece
    I feel ya thoroughly
    it really made me feel something
    of the lovely nature this
    morning.
    Thanks for sharing.
    :)
     
  3. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad,
    There is something wondeful about this morning. Thanks for the read.

    BE
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know what you're saying

    Cause I feel it too!:toast:
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in the immortal words of Chaka Khan & Rufus

    "Tell me something good", Mr. E.

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HeartBeat

    say it often
    say it u will
    tell the world how u feel
    let one know what's da deal
    gone BE.....keep it real

    man ya off da hook here dis
    be of love flowin' from a lover...:D :heart: :D
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE.


    this was sweet!... my first thought was of...
    gentle whispers. thanks for sharing.

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
  8. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's nice.
    Lovely Poetry in motion.
    Feeling this
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
  9. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Poets.

    BE
     
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