Black Poetry : !~Something~!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Aug 9, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was never
    really clear to me how
    I came to this point,
    this place
    in life.
    Seemed like I opened the book
    and ended up conjuring up
    some presence...
    Do you believe that?
    Nah, I didn't think you would.
    Hell! I don't believe it either.
    But the fact
    remains
    that I feel totally
    under the weather...
    feverish
    and full of delusions,
    my head is beating and
    this good old heart of mine is
    pounding and sore.
    So many confessions
    of this sickness has left me with
    an inflamed throat and hardly no
    voice.
    Yo, ya boi has it bad!
    It could be life-altering.
    It could be life-stretching,
    It could be...
    It could be...
    It could be...
    And the sad thing is
    that it is.
    I am, sweetly condemned to
    suffer from a sickness, a consumption
    called...
    LOVE.

    Copyright 2004
    "Kasually Bohemian" Publishing
    Poeta Nascitur, Non Fit!
    "Poets are born, not made!"
    ~PropheticNsyght aka Black Oracle​
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love certainly captures the soul, and has you looking up one day, saying, how did this happen? Love the feeling you captured here.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, love has a tendency to make you forget, where you been and where you're suppose to go. very nice piece, thanks for that.
     
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    sho nuff on point .....love the way u brough dis out
     
  5. who~is~she

    who~is~she Active Member MEMBER

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    I like this verse, of course i liked the who peice, but this one verse, it gave me a glimse of your personality. Am I right to asume that u have a dry since of humor? If not my sincerist appologies. Anyways this piece made me smile. Good to see a woman in love.

    Mad props yo.
     
  6. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its cool ma.:) I appreciate the love. By the way beautiful, I'm a man LOL I look forward to hearing from you more and I can't really describe my humor. I've always been able to make folks laugh so I'm not sure if it is dry.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Appreciatin' the love pa. Be easy
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fa sho Queen. Thanks for spittin mad love my way!!! Be blessed.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love darling watz. Your a doll.