Black Poetry : Something.....

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  1. Virgil

    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something in the way that she'd move me.
    Something in her smile and its glow.
    I bet she don't know what she'd do to me.
    I would have cherished her so,
    But I guess now she'll never know.

    Something in those chills that went through me.
    Every time that she would come and go.
    Something in the glance that she'd show me.
    I don't wanna give up now,
    I swear I believe in how.

    Would we be in love now.
    I don't know, I don't know.
    Would I have showed her my soul?
    Now that I know, that I know.

    Something in the way that she could see through me.
    I'd pretend but she still knew.
    Something about the power of my thoughts of her.
    She don't know what I went through,
    I didn't know what to do

    Something about her presence, 'cause it wooed me.
    Something about the grace that she'd show.
    Something about the strength of my feelings.
    Something about how she'll never know.
    Something about how my thoughts ran away with me.
    Something about how I had no control.
    Something about how I know I missed an opportunity.
    Something about the hurt in my soul.
    Something.........
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece , Im feeling it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    something something ain't right deep down within
    i feel this flow spreading wit truth and lovin hope
    tyte write
     
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    this was sweet
    laid very well
    feeling it
     
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    Something about what could have been and the love that was so deeply felt, this was so sweet and heartfelt.
     
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    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I would like to thamk watzinaname, mzblkangel, THEONE, $$RICH$$ for appreciating this piece.
     
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