Black Poetry : something

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Mar 31, 2003.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tired and anxious
    And welcoming a new beginning
    I hope that something materializes before
    I loose faith in what i'm believing
    I hope that something materializes before
    I loose faith in what i'm believing
    I need a supernatural healing
    Something special
    Something revealing
    I need something
    Greater than myself
    Something fulfillling
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Flow but I do believe it's in the wrong section i really enjoyed it tho peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed storm u might wanna move this to the
    poetry forum where everybody can see this
    masterpiece .........
    I will be happy to do it for you if u like !
     
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    Moving this to poetry forum.
     
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