Black Poetry : Something Wicked, This Way Comes…

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, May 26, 2004.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When a man don't see GEMS, and GOLD...right in front of his face...then label him foolish, for only a fool can see not the treasure you behold, nor the beauty in your soul. what a beautiful poem. One that took me on that journey with you...thanks for sharing this.
     
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    well felt sis...........expression flowing
     
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    I'm with queentswana on this, if he can't see the beauty so obviously at his feet, then maybe he should just keep on stepping, eloquent, as is your way, but also biting in its description of the diamonds in the rough, minus the diamonds....I like your style, as usual.
     
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    I like this piece I love the line but what can you tell a man
    that doesn’t recognize a gem
    or gold when it’s right in front of him
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    Very well put. and the truth is in the words. Any fool who cannot appreciate
    the beauty of a Queen is just that a Fool.
    Flow on
     
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    this is fabulous, u know i loved it....keep up the good work...
    :heart:
    -story.
     
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    So true

    Just the simple expressions tells more than those in depth! I love how you present the basic truth because from my realm a Flower knows when someone is serious or not. Yes, keep yourself intune alway remember you need not go through changes that so many flowers go through that break down their ultimate beauty. Trust your Grand Maker and his words of expressions for when you do the real king for your life will notice you and treasure you for a lifetime faithfully.

    Zen Master
     
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    Man this is such a Nice Poem.
     
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    Only thing that came this was was ya Pen...whoa sis... "slow down" :eek:hmy:
    I felt ya words on my paper sis.
     
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    I feel this! It has happened to me too, though you articulate it better than I could, my wonderful sister. :bowdown:
     
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