Black Poetry : Something to Give

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jul 14, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heart Dear Heart. I believe everyone has something to give you. It's up to you know what was delivered in that moment. In that time you now call wasted. A stranger, giving you a kind word. A family member giving you a hug. Consoling moments. Time isn't wasted. Never wasted. Only passed. When a relationship ends. Tally, and take account. Sift the rubble, and find the jewels ( or lessons ) that were left for you. Take those and carry them into your next day. Next journey Next love. Why do we wake with hope. Because we have those moments of joy. Those times that make the struggle worth the effort. Day to day. Week in week out. Year to eternity. If you find yourself, waking and thinking of them first. It is how the relationship flourishes. If that continues, and they find themselves doing the same. You have found true long lasting love. So Heart take those lessons and learn, yes they burn. Yet you earned the right to know. That love comes and love goes. Some never know the feeling.
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    Seven hearts up, and seven hearts down. Seven hearts a new one for each day. If one breaks, carry another until you no longer hurt. Someone will come along and mend the broken one.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loving dis here ..... let ya pen scribe as please
     
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    Bless,
    Nice flow. I like
     
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    That was BEAUTIFUL HODEE! THat made me feel all tinglly inside.
    Absolutely beautiful!
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Destee Fam. $$RICH$$ had me thinking after I read his memoir he wrote for his son. Had me thinking about being broken hearted. Feeling loss and sad. I hope he reflects positively on his loss. $$RICH$$ take the day, cruise through tomorrow. Keep your son's memory close. He hears your heart felt concerns and wishes. Explaining to his children is the hard part. Children don't understand the never. Done.

    I gave seven hearts because everyday, a broken heart lingers. Hopefully one is repaired to use and continue through. When you reach the seventh day. Breath again, and look to your heart. Somehow, someway. We continue.
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HODEE.....:bowdown:

    Even though this wasn't written FOR me. I needed to hear this piece right here!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Thank you so much for this BEAUTIFUL PIECE
     
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