Black Poetry : !~Something, this way blows~!

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Midnight...

    The stillness of the
    room unsettles me.
    No sound,
    not a breath or stirring.
    I wake up!
    Dry mouthed and the sound of
    my tell-tell heart beating
    rhythmically.
    The cover of peace...now vapor
    and disintegrating.

    Nothingness...
    Stillness
    No sound....
    Seems like life in a vacuum.
    I look over to my right and he
    lies there.
    The atmosphere, foreboding and
    pregnant with expectancy...
    I glace at him.
    He lies there, a faint smile upon his lips.
    Peace and tranquility dance across his
    form.
    He sleeps in serenity; no doubt with thoughts of
    draining, mocking and destroying me first and foremost.
    Vengeful and malicious, always beneath that
    charming and handsome exterior.

    The scent of murder...
    contention, strife, chaos, malice and
    contempt assail my nostrils.
    Gripping the sheets tightly, striving not to
    reach for the hand gun in the bed side drawer.
    The thoughts appealing...her dead equals me free!
    A shining and infinitely new beginning.
    Wrestling with myself; pulling at the outer edges of
    self-control and discipline.
    Married life = Bliss, What a D*** joke!

    Sweat begins to gather upon my brow.
    If I can just hold out until morning...
    If I can just wait until sunrise,
    until something, this way blows...
    If I can just hang on...everything will be fine...
    Getting up and quickly...no literally running from the
    room, downstairs and into the kitchen.
    Sanctuary...solitude...a safe-haven for a time;
    just until the sun rises...
    Just until something, this way blows....
    If I can just hold on...this will all be over.
    I'll be rid of him, the menace, the destroyer...my peace-
    shatterer.
    If I can just wait; just get a hold of these murderous
    thoughts...these blood-drenched impressions of her.....
    If I can just be patient until sunrise, freedom will finally
    come-in the right way...after years of a non-diluted hell...
    Freedom is finally in view, if I can just wait until something, this
    way blows...
    If I can just wait for that something...
    If I can just wait for that DIVORCE, I’ll be alright.

    ~Copyright 2004
    "Kasually Bohemian" Publishing
    Poeta Nascitur, Non Fit!
    "Poets are born, not made!"
    ~PropheticNsyght aka Black Oracle​
     
  2. who~is~she

    who~is~she Active Member MEMBER

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    Im really starting to like your work (not that it matters).



    ILL drop.
     
  3. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so so so so so much! You are too beautiful!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heavy flowing tyte write
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such vivid use of description...seems like this should lead into a part two....
     
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    tight flow enjoyed the read
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are such a prolific creative writer...
    this sounds like the beginning of an intriguing
    short story...
    nonetheless, pen the stories of many
    and I love the differenct perspectives
    you write from...

    As always....
    Impressed
     
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    I was on the edge of my seat reading this piece. I was truly afraid for the person. Wow.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YEH THIS WAS TIGHT BUT LET ME DROP THIS RIGH THERE

    Keep my garage buffed but I dodge stuff large enough
    To crush my Lex, rush to sex as she blush complex its rough
    To keep a girl, streets I hurl kisses at their lips and chew snuff
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    danm i was felling every word in this one.. thnaks for droppin .. and continue to hit us wit some mo hotties
     
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