Quiet Poetry Lounge : Something Simple...

tashatoya

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You...See you, bring me back to life
Because before there was a you and i
Things weren't right, they were as unhappy
As they could ever seem to be
Days were cold and nights were hot because
I was confused on what to do next
Like a chesspeice waiting on its move
Ready to say checkmate but not knowing
Where to go while my opponet was the world
With its everyday problems like not being
Able to pay the bills, watching the drug dealers
Making their sells on the corner
As if i was watching a low-budget movie,
But then you came along, and moved me
To a state of mind where i haven't been
In so long... Tranquility, Love, Tranquility, Love
You...See you, Bring me back to life
 

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how deep I feel u here very well said
 

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He simply appeared...and the life you thought was gone, ...reappeared.
wonderful piece, you flowed it well poet.
 

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Some of the most beautiful things are the simple ones - like this piece.
 

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