Black Poetry : Something Short & Sweet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Mar 21, 2004.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Will U braid my goatee?
    Will U slowly intertwine the strands of hair
    as we're standin' there in close proximity?
    Let your hands prepare a plait that will symbolize my identity...
    Signify my individuality...
    2 some, the appearance may be deeper than the mean,
    But that act can evoke intimacy.
    Kind of like massaging feet...
    Or receiving sweets on Valentine's Day...
    So I reiterate...
    Will U braid my goatee?
     
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    The title is so appropriate, reading this made me smile. It had a very earthy quality to it, keep the flow going. Oh, and btw Positive you must be familiar with Tremont St. and Mass Ave...:)
     
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    likes this...
    oh yeah...
    short and sweet
    but ummmmm
    you getting frisky again
    or what...:lol:
     
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    lololol....
    braid'n da fu-manchu...hahahahaha
    what an interesting concept brah...
    you should expound on this...it could
    be really great son....a classic love tale
    i like this...props

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Sister watz, Mass. Ave? Wally's, loved that spot. Tremont, Me & my daughter would chill in the Commons & feed the squirrels from our fingertips, or are U talkin' bout our Tremont between Madison Park & Mission Hill? Down by Roxbury Crossing?

    Sister angel, gettin' there, just need that partner 4 the trip.

    Brother Khasm, U know, I just might. Peace.
     
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    I was thinking bout the one in Roxbury, but it's a long stretch of road. I've been to the commons many times, sometimes just to chill. I used to live near the intersection of Mass Ave and Tremont, near wear "Estelle's" and People's Baptist Church used to be.
     
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    Estelle's, isn't that where Paul Pierce got pierced & beat?
     
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    Not sure, I still have relatives that live in Beantown, but I don't live there any more.
     
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    Yeah, I love that dirty water.
     
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    That water was pretty foul. Do you miss living there though? Too expensive for one thing, and when I was a teenager there, there were some sections that were down right prejudiced.
     
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