Quiet Poetry Lounge : something rare

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Nov 15, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You moved my soul across the
    miles and took hold
    of my heart when I fear to let it go…
    assurance you gave
    you reached out to find what was in me….
    I took your hand in trust..
    You enable me to give a gift that
    I didn't know how
    not force nor lies came
    full of joy and covered in lush
    of happiness
    For this I Thank You
    for being who you are with me..
    no longer bare your problems alone..
    for I stand by your side
    and carry them with you...
    my strength will build
    your weakness,
    As yours build mine…
    something rare …
    INDEED
     
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    this is so beautiful so deep
    the bond in your flow
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Boy did this touch me deep...wow :jawdrop:
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks family..for the love and support.....:angel1:
    bonding of two that becomes one..
    you give your all not comin in half step..
    when one cant see you see for them
    when one cant feel you feel for them
    its all in building and makin
    a stronger foundation
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaa! dis here was bowwwwwwww!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$Rich$$....lol glad you like it..means alot thank you for all the love and support..

    must dont go in like this..
    they see for them self
    not worried on their mate..
     
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    :jawdrop: whoa, girl, this is one of the most beautiful things I think you've ever written, gripping from the first line to the last. many, many, many props and much love for this.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis...thank you..i am so glad you like..

    but to me this is the only way to be...
    two is indeed one when you
    go that whole mile...
    much love my big sister loves ya..:angel1:
     
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