Black Poetry : something new...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mizdee2002, Jan 16, 2002.

  1. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    do u?

    i remember u lovin' me
    watching me while i slept
    holding me
    & lulling me to sleep
    with your heartbeat
    i remember u lovin' me
    telling me your story
    page by page
    funny
    & wondrous
    & sorrowful
    at the same time
    i remember u lovin' me
    teaching me about football
    and all the other sports
    even though i wasn't especially
    inclined to learn
    i remember u lovin' me
    your tears mingling with mine
    on my breasts
    your laugh dancing in my ears
    i remember u lovin' me
    making love to me
    feeling me
    gazing into my eyes
    daring my heart to stop
    & begging my body to go on an orgasmic ride with u
    i remember u lovin' me
    listening to my problems
    never judgmental of my liberal ideals
    encouraging my free spirit to fly
    i remember u lovin' me
    do u remember lovin' me?
     
  2. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baby girl! baby girl! sound likes the love jones. hang in there. it does get better.
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes....

    yes....and yesssssssssssssss!

    a
     
  4. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go on wit yo bad self!!!!

    Mizdee, you are str8 puttin it down. Like them words sis.
    Keep it coming!!!!:)
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MizDee

    I'm loving the flo of this. I enjoyed your scribe down memory lane. :)

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  6. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i write...

    ...to get free. thanks so much for the luv.

    dee
     
  7. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE TOCH

    ****!
    I remember when....naw I ain't gone go there.
    Nice piece poet
    I thoroughly enjoyed
    Thanks for sharing.
    Holla
     
  8. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    memories...
    sometimes sweet, sometimes sad, sometimes happy, sometimes painful, but always there to remind us...

    K
     
  9. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now yessss!!!

    surely he remember u
    yes he know of u
    yes and never shell one forget !
    u pose a spray of lost love:heart:
     
  10. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah...i remember you...and i shall never let those thoughts be replaced by another...

    this piece is tight...lovin it poet...

    one.
     
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