Black Poetry : Something Meaningful

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  1. GODFATHA

    GODFATHA Banned MEMBER

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    sprawls cold and naked ahead/

    6.30 wake up call/

    i self eject like toasted bread from the bed/

    sidle sideways to the left/

    dreams dreamt/

    now sadly swiftly disconnect/

    i wind up into the getting-it-together routine/

    wash face, long held power piss, baby bum clean/

    i invision that today/

    i want for something meaningful/

    four hours later plan goes quite askew/

    i’m heading to town to look around the nothing new shopping run/

    a leaden frown hastily develops/

    as i drown in the youthfulness of the swarm/

    the untruthfulness of it all envelopes/

    i’m destined like all the others to regularly draw myself away from evilness/

    many outskirts fulfill the need to flirt with the seduction of plastic purchases/

    the drastic cursory nature of the consumer puma/

    unscrupulous in its stalking/

    looming ready to pounce/

    ‘i need to get my ounce of the pie/

    will i ever rid myself of this mantra before i die/

    tears of money rain from palm to palm trying to cleanse/

    and assist us to feel whole/

    but on the whole a hole/

    an emptiness/

    is left/

    what i consume leaves me bereft/

    a state of real undress/

    is what we need/

    One love like Marley sang/

    is what my mind bleeds/
     
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    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    tyte drop brother.....keep flowin!
     
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    wow....im most definely impressed..tyte scribe b....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This jam out in perfection flow head speaketh bruh !
     
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    Word...

    I must say, you truly painted a meaningful picture while scribing this:spinstar:

    :welldone:

    :picture:
     
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    Tyte drop poet.
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...............!
     
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