Black Poetry : Something About~~~~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Aug 17, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See its something about the way you love me….

    Drive me crazy but
    I am secure about this
    Sweet Love Romance as
    Passion seeps
    Compassion ally
    Let me take it here……

    See its something about the way you love me….

    Overjoyed on a high
    Its like fire and desire
    That covers my soul
    As your love invades me
    Moves through and through
    Holds on me tight
    See its more then words…
    Within the miles
    We covered ground
    As we stick together
    They say it can’t be done
    With ever measure
    I always find…
    Pleasure in all that you do
    Drifting on a melody of you
    You’re my strength my love
    As you satisfy my needs
    You’re my baby
    As we dance in flight
    Bout to take it to the top

    See its something about the way you love me….

    Feeling good
    There’s no stopping us now
    Your love Your love
    Brings me up when I am down….
    Calm and gentle it folds me in

    And I believe in you I believe in us
    For this love is how I pictured
    Flowing smooth just like a river…
    As you whisper softly
    Here I come
    See we are the two
    Bout to take it to the top

    I am grateful…for your love
    Your love sets me free
    Wraps me in warmth
    Feels like the world….
    And
    I LOVE YOU
    MY BABY

    See its something about the way you love me….​
     
  2. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mba u really kno how 2 drop em
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flowed very serenely and sweetly, yea, I know what you mean here.
     
  4. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Break it down, MzBlk. This was truly beautiful.
     
  5. Muse

    Muse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "I always find…
    Pleasure in all that you do
    Drifting on a melody of you"

    always huh? Now thats some major loving. Enjoyed this beautiful write Mz!

    -Muse
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u did this one on point it was felt deeply too
    bust it down to da core ........whewwwwwwww
     
  7. Andreattah

    Andreattah Active Member MEMBER

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    wow...
    you really have a way with words,keep it tight.
    i'm always waitin..

    beautiful piece
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Andreattah.. glad ya enjoy my scribes... :coffee: thank you for da love

    $$RICH$$..happy ya feeling it!!! :D only one way to be...REAl...thank you for the support and love always!!!:kiss:

    Muse..happy you enjoyed... :D thank you

    jazzymoonchild..no other way to do it..thanks for the love :coffee:

    watzinaname..yes indeed thanks for the support :coffee:

    daroc..thanks sis..you keep dropin dem too now... :D

    Peace
    Angel
     
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