Black Poetry : Somethin' on ur mind?

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  1. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You picked me up at my house
    I noticed u was quiet as a mouse
    like you had something on your mind....

    I wanted to find out what;
    but something told me to just shut up
    I knew you would tell me
    sooner or later u would step 2 me

    So we get to the restaurant
    and we first order some wine
    and when the waiter returns
    you say you'd like the year '69

    The wine had such a good taste
    and I was glad u picked out a nice place
    for us to celebrate our anniversary
    the first time u asked to go steady

    We ate we drank
    we laughed at the
    other man lick his plate
    and the piano player
    was playing our song
    and we danced and talked
    all night long

    But still I knew something whazzup
    cause u still didn't seem relaxed
    like u were trying to say something
    is there something u have to ask?

    So we were driving
    and u suggested
    we go to the beach
    and take a long walk
    and get the sand in our feet

    Looked like they were so in love---
    the stars and the moon
    and at that moment so was I
    my heart started to swoon

    And we stopped strollin'
    and u kissed me so deep
    and whispered in my ear
    " you remind me of my jeep"

    And we laughed and laughed
    and kissed and kissed
    and I knew I was in Heaven
    what could be better than this

    Then at last
    u finally asked
    got on bended knee
    and proposed 2 me

    I said yes
    and took off my dress
    and we made love
    on black sand

    ****... are u impressed?
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELL NOW!!!! I'm loving this flow of yours!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see u bout to get me started again !
    ya flowin sweet up in here
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Bishop.....I'm walking on the beach and I see the light from your lighthouse....
    Can I come in?
     
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    The door is open....
     
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    Thanks Bishop....U are always welcome in DIIMOND's playhouse of poetry.... and I am headed ur way sweetheart!
     
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