Black Poetry : Someone Real ( I wonder..)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DIIMOND, Oct 8, 2002.

  1. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Sep 26, 2002
    Messages:
    323
    Likes Received:
    2
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +3
    Well what's the use anyway
    will I ever meet him?

    Will he sweep me off my feet
    and make my world brighter?

    I've been looking
    for Mr. Right to appear
    like I knight in shining armor
    but this is no fairy tale is it?
    And it constantly makes me wonder....

    Maybe the problem is
    that I'm looking...
    searching
    seeking with all my soul


    And maybe I'm just
    supposed to be patient
    Instead of running from
    man 2 man
    seeking satisfaction
    and a wedding band...


    But I guess I'm a hopeless romantic
    People don't think that way anymore
    I'm dreaming of a real gentleman
    to just come and knock on my heart's door

    And I can't change
    Guess I believe in real love-----
    the passion
    the excitement
    the friendship
    the longing
    the yearnin'
    the affection
    the caresses
    the massages
    and rub downs
    the conversation
    the laughs
    and the long walks;

    and just being with
    a real man.....


    Yeah... I believe it...
    I still do
    can't help it
    how about u?
    :love: :heart: :love: :heart: :love: :heart: :love: :heart: :love:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    indeed

    we seek da true love one's heart so holds
    we look in da house for dat comfort and
    all da bliss of happiness ya true KING awaits u

    U will know by da glow on his face
    u will trace da respect he holds
    u will see da unknown from his motions
    dis love u seeks is a real love from way back
    and if u close ya eyes u will vision him
    u will see his essense of beauty
    and when u open them back up
    u will know it's not a dream nor a myth

    guess what (((i'll be standing their beside u with open arms)))
    :heart: :kiss: :heart:

    he will come unto u my sweet take yo time
     
  3. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Sep 26, 2002
    Messages:
    323
    Likes Received:
    2
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +3
    $RICH$ Thanks for finishing my poem...
    It was very wonderful...
    1 Love....
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    most welcome ......we seek into da not so bright places
    and we fine a some what compassionate notion but
    give it time and da true love will come unto u
    so watch 4 me daily u never know when i'll come !....
    really your KING hear u and feel yo emotions
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2001
    Messages:
    7,648
    Likes Received:
    40
    Occupation:
    thrivin' spiritually/physically/emotionally/financ
    Location:
    where failure is not an option
    Ratings:
    +42
    hey you have to be patience
    and if you can do that it will come to you
    if you want it bad enough
    but take your time

    DSS

    feeling the poet
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 31, 2001
    Messages:
    1,662
    Likes Received:
    29
    Ratings:
    +31
    I think you just know what you want! And that's a good thang!
     
  7. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 8, 2002
    Messages:
    289
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    Yes, he is out there and he will find you. Hold tight to what you want and don't settle for less.
     
  8. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Sep 26, 2002
    Messages:
    323
    Likes Received:
    2
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +3
    Thanks ya'll...

    DSS... So true So true...

    Desert Storm... u are right .. I do know what I want
    and that is a good thang girl...

    Gaylee...thanks for the advice.. U know I won't settle for nothing less.
    1 love ya'll
     
  9. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 16, 2001
    Messages:
    1,778
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    memphis, Tn
    Ratings:
    +115
    kiss and hug

    It's good to know that some still believe. I felt you on this and it made me just wanna give you a kiss on the cheek and an encouraging hug to let you know that....
    Beauty can not be denide ,for it blooms at exactly the right time.

    your soul exhibits a beauty that can't be ignored and the right onw will recognize. I'm sure that many of us would like to apply for the title of mr. diamond. Hang in there. ;)

    Dre'
     
  10. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Sep 26, 2002
    Messages:
    323
    Likes Received:
    2
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +3
    A007..
    I'm accepting applications for Mr. Diimond Mon. thru Fri. Apply online anytime!!!! Thankx for the wonderful wordz in ur response.... U know I was feeling what u said ...
    Thank you for the kiss and the hug..
    :kiss: Back at ya Dre'!!!!:kiss:
    ;)
     
Loading...