Black Poetry : Someone has taken your spot

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was walking the park the other day
    And that's when I spotted you and didn't know what to say
    I wanted to call out your name but was speechless as to what to say
    Besides, you looked so happy with her I was sure you weren't going to look my way
    You were holding her hand just like you used to do mine
    You whispered in her ear you loved her, my how so kind
    Because I remember when I used to be her, now I'm the back of the line
    Sitting under a shaded tree wondering why I did you so unkind

    But you can't fight a girl because she's taking your spot
    And you can't curse her out because she's something you're not
    You can't march up to someone just because you still love him alot
    And you can't hate her because she has something you ain't got
    Cause you did him wrong and she did him right

    I remember all the days i used to reject your calls
    And go to the club giving my number to all
    I didn't want to be tied down to no one, just ball
    But in the end I see that was my real downfall
    You see, I set the stage for someone else to walk in
    while I was out doing my thing, talking to other fine men
    I didn't see what I had at home was good and
    You were just what I needed and wanted in the end
    But by then you had already found another friend
    Man!!

    But you can't fight a girl because she's taking your spot
    And you can't curse her out because she's something you're not
    You can't march up to someone just because you still love him alot
    And you can't hate her because she has something you ain't got
    Cause you did him wrong and she did him right

    Yea, I see you smiling
    You remember the good times we had too for a while and
    It makes me laugh too because we have a ture history together and
    I know just about everything about you
    how you like your tea to be warm and never cold, like me
    I miss our same likes and dislikes, it hurts me
    But baby
    I don't want to mess anything up because no one messed it up for US but me
    So when she's done, know that you have a friend in me
    Let her know that you don't have to take her **** and that you have me
    Until then i'll have to keep in mind........

    But you can't fight a girl because she's taking your spot
    And you can't curse her out because she's something you're not
    You can't march up to someone just because you still love him alot
    And you can't hate her because she has something you ain't got
    Cause you did him wrong and she did him right
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this should have been a song. whats cracka lacking my sista. hope al is well with cha. :welldone:
     
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    Nice scribe sista. Flo it on....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lyricks spots change yet another good things rolls in
    i hear ya on this .........no need .
     
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    tcr1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea u speaking to my situation in this peice
     
  6. Love Always,

    Love Always, Guest

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    Im feelin this...:spinstar:
     
  7. amin

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    Get out there and perform that you will get props!
     
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    i liked this a lot krazelyricks :welldone:
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fam, I really forgot that I posted this piece. LOL. Thanks for feeling it. I really appreciate it. I was thinking about turning it into a song. A lot of my poems could be songs but I never really looked into none of that. Thanks again fam and much love and peace.
     
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    "remember all the days i used to reject your calls
    And go to the club giving my number to all
    I didn't want to be tied down to no one, just ball
    But in the end I see that was my real downfall
    You see, I set the stage for someone else to walk in
    while I was out doing my thing, talking to other fine men
    I didn't see what I had at home was good and
    You were just what I needed and wanted in the end
    But by then you had already found another friend
    Man!!"

    feeling this sistah all the way! isn't it ironic that we never miss a good thing until it is gone


    sweetee, love
     
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