Black Poetry : Somebody Who...

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Somebody made me mad today about who and what
    I don't really want to say.
    Somebody who I never failed to be there for.
    From collect calls from near and far.
    Somebody who resides in my heart.
    How had my undying loyalty from the start.
    Somebody who I taught not to be a liar...but wait
    somebody who knew you better not come early and
    you **** sho better not come late.
    Somebody who know's me well, well enough to
    know that there are some places that with me
    you don't really want to go.
    Somebody who I taught that word was bond.
    Somebody who I taught to never forget where
    you came from.

    Somebody put me to the test today. If they had
    thought better of it they would have tried some
    other way. Somebody took my trust and thrust
    a dagger in it's core...wounded a place that
    was already sore. Somebody took a chance of
    being cut from the vine...this will not happen
    time after time. You see I give you many chances
    to begin...and a short distance in which to end
    all
    the
    bullshyt
    and the lies
    all the faulty albies...
    I am a reformed bullshyter, you tangle with me you
    got a double lip hitter. I don't play games and seldom
    make excuses I don't issue or accept such abuses.
    Somebody who
    I trusted
    just got
    downright
    busted
    From the floor up the done tore up , this longtime
    trusting bond...welcoming footsteps that answer
    the door at any hour. Eyes that never flash when
    you hand me a dying flower. I know where you
    came from , not sure where you going...but I
    would stake a bet...that if in life you give a lot
    of hell!
    It's a lot of Hell that you are going to get!

    BJS(C)2003:maddd:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooooooweeeeeeeeeeeee!!
    whom ever it be somebody don't
    know dis queen can roll

    say it all let it out let it seep from da door
    then come to me a love so sweet
    as i mend the open pain caress da madness
    keep u sane , protect ya heart as i whisper ya name
    come in flyte tonight upon my heart
    here's where we start.........................................

    I feel ya the one we keep near and feel so is
    the one that kick us from behind but we ain't having dat !
    well felt
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like someone gonna get it...great to read you again ms B
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is good to be read/heard! LOL

    Yeah, I always say instead of going straight off on someone give yourself sometime to cool off before going to the person and my poetry is a wonderful tool to get my thoughts straight...this one came straight off the top of my dome..."I am flying by the seat of my panty hose on this one"! LOL But as always I am glad someone read...lots of posting and not much reading going on.

    Blessings ON Ya House!
     
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