Black Poetry : Somebody SCREAM

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Sep 5, 2005.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Calm...

    On the rebound

    TV trying to be sound

    Leaders fronting they're down

    Somebody SCREAM

    Alms making the rounds

    Goodwill lost and then found

    How many people have drowned

    What a bad scene...

    Signs of the endtime

    Chaos and death is in town

    JESUS is coming around

    Somebody SCREAM ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari :bowdown:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
  2. watzinaname

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    If everyone screamed who really felt like screaming the nation would be temporaily deaf, but maybe that would be a good thing. Keep on saying so much with so few words poet.
     
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    I like this. Im sure most are screaming internally. We do need people to SCREAM, we always do and have, but if everyone is screaming- no1 hears anything
     
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    This one was very powerful. Sealed despair calling out..... ( I hope... :smile: )
    Nice!

    moham
     
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    man together if we all scream maybe we can be heard
    this was deep yet a strong force
     
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    yea new orleans was crazy man and i think they're screaming for real

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    Screamin....yeah...watchin all the chaos make me feel like doin that...

    everyword in this poem spoke truth

    amen to all that...

    keep the flow goin

    Mz.Soull aka prizefighter
     
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    I feel you!! Let our voices be heard! Nice poem!
     
  9. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Express yourself...

    Holla, Holla,

    Thank you.
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetsought:heart: (hug .....you are always positive in youre respondings)



    i havent readed much of you
    i have more time to read again cause me laptob is working again sinds a mond lol

    ....but everytime i read. a piece of you.


    i feel ya and hear ya....





    speak on...







    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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