Black Poetry : Somebody Out Here

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cherryblossom, Oct 31, 2009.

  1. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Yes, there's somebody out here. I hear what you hear. I feel what you feel.

    For I, too, receive the vibrations of seemingly sonar sensations from love gone cold and a soul hollowed by frustrated, exasperated, hexed and vexed emotions echoing off a mind and heart growing stagnant dripping and seeping cerebral and ventricle blood from old wounds....

    I, too, feel the disturbing, disquieting and distressing dynamics of depressing developments which drift into a depraved, destructive and disastrous denouement of dejection and despair....

    I, too, have been engulfed and affected by the adverse, apathetic, antagonistic, acrimonious, acerbic, animus and afflictions of this debased, debauched, and desolate world.

    Yes, there's somebody out here. I hear what you hear. I feel what you feel.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes there is something near
    full of destruction and harmful fear
    yes i too know it's something out there !
     
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    The something out there
    Is closer than you think
    It hides beneath your eyelids
    Everytime you blink
    And that foreboding feeling
    Is covered by a grin
    When the fear lies within.
     
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    Great post Sister cherryblossom

    Upside down, inside out.
    Vibrations true.. I hear the noise

    This world has gone MAD!

    The anger, No Joy, No Trust, No Love
    Old wounds, from the past,
    Still surfacing in new ways

    Thank you for this flow.
    Your talent and perspective is fantastic sister
    Keep sharing :)
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There's a whole lot of not so good going on in the world and I'm sure many can hear and feel the mentioned goings on.

    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich, Hodee, and Coco!


    I wrote this piece waaaay last year. It was in response to a friend who wondered was "there anybody out there."

    So, this was my answer.


    Yes, this world can be a cruel, cold place; but there is always somebody out there who knows what you're going thru.


    Thanks again!
     
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