Black Poetry : Somebody Open Up a Window in Here

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Jul 25, 2001.

  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Somebody open up a window in here

    It's hot and I'm starting to sweat
    Can't let
    You get
    The best of my intellect

    You know you all that and box of Newports
    And I don't even smoke despite what you thought
    In the world wide web and I'm caught
    Loving you is an afterthought

    You got my full attention
    Like a deer caught in the headlights
    I read your poems like Braille though I still have my eye sight
    But I feel every word, I'm consumed by what you type
    You seem real on screen like somebody I could really like

    I'm not trying to scare you off
    I'm like a Minnesota timberwolf up in the mountains feeling lost
    I'm trying to get in there but not by applying force
    Cause I'm a gentleman - of course
    And the fact that I'm not there with you is not by choice
    I'd come by plane car boat or horse
    No matter how much It costs

    Somebody open up a window in here
    It's hot and I'm starting to sweat
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Oh My My My !!! Hmmmmmmmmmmmm
    who got you like this So'ja ????????? who she be iz ??
    it can't be me cause i aint wrote nuth'n in a long time

    hmmmmmmmm

    less'n ya been back on page 59 or sump'n

    hehehehe

    go 'head Bruh Man ... let her know!

    :heart:

    Destee <~ going to turn up da ac ... brb
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LADIES beware...

    the target has been scoped
    the sights...set
    the so'ja from the streets
    is about to let
    feelings be known
    for a special someone
    no time to sweat
    planning's already DONE.
    heed the words
    of this heady pronounce
    prepare for pleasure
    brutha ready to pounce

    GO So'ja.
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** Hot So'Ja!!!!

    Chill out - not bro!!!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so'ja man...uhmmm, let me go awn and give you my fan to use, cause i don't want you to sweat like that, sweetie.:D
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't Worry I'll Save You!

    Watch me as I soar like an eagle to save your day!
    Lovely!
    Sincerely,
    (SUPERWOMAN)
    Desert Storm :wink:
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O' MY BRUTHA

    RED ALERT!!

    DA SO'JA FROM DA STREET BOUT TO
    AIR OUT SOME THANGZ ROUND HEAH!
    MAN I FEEL THE HEAT......................
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Personal Soja....


    just between you&me...

    you know you can tell SunShyne who she is...

    ryght??? well... who-eva! she's lucky as hell! :)

    & this was some a dat sweet tyght-ness!

    OneLuv.
     
  9. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems to me like more than just a window needs to be opened up in heah!!!

    On second thought...perhaps the problem is...that too much has OPENED already!!

    maybe it is best to remain....

    *closed*....

    NOT!!!!!!!!;) :D
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja,

    This is a very tight poem.

    YLSS :heart:
     
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