Quiet Poetry Lounge : Somebody Knockin....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    “While I was down there praying”

    I felt the knock on the door
    My soul began to open up
    At that moment I knew
    A change was coming…
    For today, I heard it clear
    As I was praying…

    The knock came
    My heart skip, my spirit began to dance
    The answer was…Vivid…as I felt the power
    Tears ran feeling his power
    Take over…
    For His light shines on me

    “While I was down there praying”

    The joy took over
    And he began His work
    My life turning around
    And this rose blooming
    In his garden…
    Blind but now I see
    Hurt but I have started to heal
    Yesterday I thought I was not worthy
    But he shown me different
    Today I heard his knock
    Knock
    Knock

    “While I was down there praying”


    (C) 2005
    Poerty Prasie
    New Vision
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Always know that "wonders" work well, on bended knees, and if you really listen for that knock, it matters not what you're bending on.
    I felt this piece to the core, thanks for sharing it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when one knocks be sure to always let him in
    this was beautifully pose'd sista Angel
     
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    knock knock !!! did u hear me ......
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam fo the love here....

    knock knock....did you hear?
     
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    sometimes u have to stay there til ya change come
    as the ol' folks would say...

    Very inspirational work!
    Sage
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    inspiring poem, liked the message.
     
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    yep and the door wide open !
    com'in !
    awesome drop angel
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the love and kind words

    peace
    angel
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Somebody knockin

    this is really a beautiful poem.
     
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