Black Poetry : Somebody done lost their mind!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Somebody done lost their mind.
    Walked in the club , and wasn't
    there two minutes before some
    fool pinched my behind.

    Now I know this butt is too much
    to ignore, but if I knew who did
    it they would be head first on the
    floor. Touching me, is a Federal
    offense without permission.

    Somebody done lost their mind.
    Came around the corner at church
    and heard the whispers, "I have
    never seen her with a mister!"
    "She looks like somebody is making
    her glow!" Who is it I sure want
    to know.

    Now what I do and who with
    is nobody's business, and I
    am getting tired of being on the
    defensive. So I add up the insults
    and count up my blessings and
    decide it's Satan and with my
    mind and life he is messing.

    Somebody done lost their mind.
    If they think every time I go out
    it's a husband I am trying to
    desperately find. I got a life full
    of passion and a plate full of
    satisfaction, my work, my family
    my friends...it never ends.

    Why so many questions about
    MS.Lucious B, why so many want
    to know about me? I am just another
    "Queen in waiting", minding my business and hell yes I am dating.

    Somebody done lost their mind.
    Pointing and yet staring at my
    ample behind. Don't hate cause
    God blessed me like that. And for
    the brother's who want to change
    me, I hand them their hat.

    Cinnamon brown with a hint of yellow,
    big brown eyes that flash from happy
    to mellow. I am solid and shapely and
    got my head together, with a plan for
    my life in good or bad weather.

    Somebody done lost their mind!
    Always seeking and trying to find...
    all of my secrets and past indescretions
    don't worry wait for the book, I will
    make my own confessions...
    Got a lot to say that will fill up a book.
    So much to see you will take a second
    look.

    I know where I am going with the grace of God, I did my homework
    and my penance and am ready to
    trod... to fields of Lily's and milk
    and honey and it 's not always
    about the money.

    Somebody done lost their mind!
    My treasures are obvious and they
    are not hard to find. My light shines
    from on top of the hill, filled with
    the Spirit and not a cheap thrill.

    Don't waste your time in mindless
    gossip, cause KARMA, got yo name.
    And every time you utter some rumor
    it's your own self you defame. You lose
    you honor and your self respect. And your own faults you cannot detect.

    Somebody done lost their mind!
    To bad I got to leave those losers
    behind. I am moving up to higher
    ground, going to a place that hater's
    won't' be found. This is sacred hallowed ground. And no one with a
    sense of malice will be around.

    So if it's you and you know who you
    be...You need to focus on yourself and
    not on me! You need to try and get yourself together, cause I have done
    my homework and I am ready for good and bad weather..."Gather ye rosebuds while ye may"...cause soon
    gathering time will pass away!
    BJS(C)2003
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl you went off...
    love this...
    tight..work that pen...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    some body done lost it fo real gurl
    u took it there and back like dat
    whack twisted mind flow
    dis was a movie show
    lovin it , lovin it , lovin it ...............drop
    mo ! mo ! mo ! Mo !!!!!!
    MsB in da houseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !
     
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    HAHAHAHAHA :lol: LoL
    oh me oh my mercy mercy chile...
    *gasping for air from laughin so hard*
    GURL i know what you mean cause you mean what ya say OKAY?? :) lol
    they are messin with the wrong sista and thas a fact...
    tell them gurl :)
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mz and Rich, my best supporters tonight!

    Y'all be careful what you inspire me to do...cause I am feeling quite creative tonight! Just feeling the vibe, don't know if it's the love or the lack thereof! hahahahah! Y'all know what I mean!
    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    lady Queen ya scribe is off da hook
    so i want ya to flow on bring it heavy
    sweet and mild keep me smiling
    coz ya doing it up and y'all don't know what ya missing

    sho some love coz sistah laying it out !!!!
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl ya better work dat pen...
    this was off it...
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You go head wit your bad self!
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you really ripped this one to shreds! loved it...much love
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For all of you who responded, thank you!

    Writing is a joy to [email protected] make it even more so with your kind and thoughtful responses....I appreciate the love...see you on the boards!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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