Black Poetry : somebody asked me...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Twofish, May 1, 2001.

  1. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    somebody asked me...

    to get freaky with da rhyme
    should I oblidge?
    and take it like it's mine
    grab it from behind and squeeze
    ever so gently...

    should I caress with tender touch
    the flow til they scream "Enough!"
    and go down deep, hittin tha point
    of satisfaction
    should I persist until I inflict
    a chemical reaction?

    should I lick around tha tip
    of the message
    and grip it, holding firm
    till the essence
    pours from within?

    and is it sin...

    should I instead
    take the head of the topic
    and place it in my garden
    to stop it
    from shaking and shivering
    quivering with pleasure
    from the measure of learning
    I provide...
    or should I keep it yearning?

    perhaps I will steadily
    pick up the pace
    readily, intensely state
    that I am "all you need,
    and all you breathe,
    all you'll feed upon,
    and all you fein"
    my dreams are all in thee
    and I see Me in you
    You see it too...

    I ain't gotta pimp da freak
    to speak true to da heart
    cuz my mind is my most sacred part!

    (forgive me! these free-flows pouring out of me like mental orgasms yo...lol :) )
    S.Z.Divine 2001
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2Fish,

    Ya hittin' on this one fa sho queen!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear ya'....2Fish~~

    Do ya' thang girlfrynd!!
     
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    SHOULD YOU...

    ...yeal, you should

    if they ask you must comply
    do i have to tell you why
    a gentle touch
    ...slight caress
    of verse and soul
    upon your chest
    is all the whisper
    they'll ever need
    to satisfy
    their inner greed
    for flowing rivers
    deep and wet
    show them love
    that's what you'll get

    DO WHAT YOU DO...:)
     
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    Too Good!!!

    Just too **** GOOD!!! Now that was HOT!!!
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fire!

    Sistah,flow how you know. Do what's in your heart and do for you and what will be best for you. Tight! :jumping:
    Desert Storm
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    niiiiiiice

    this was butta baby!!

    nfinite
    in the garden.
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cum

    widit 2 fish! cum widit! :)

    A
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2FISH.....

    (lol)

    you told me to be prepared... but i still wasn't ready! :)

    sis... go on & flow like ya know!!... this was tyghter than
    the skin on the back of ya hand!... you feelin' me ryght?!

    LuvU4Life...
    SunShyne~
     
  10. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you poets make me smile:)

    no matter how I cum wit it ya'll keeps it on da 4 real, and I appreciate you...all of you I mean that!
    Baller I liked the flow in your response as well!
    Truly I liked all those responses though, but dang, if a sistah gon have to post each one a personal reply I'm a be up ALL NIGHT y'heard!
    Peace and Love Infinite
    p.s. GA my gyrlQueen ~ i feelz dat!
     
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