Black Poetry : Somebody asked me What Happened

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Sep 16, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You use to trust me.

    I never hurt you.

    I have lead you with only the vision

    and love a man can give.

    I see out into the future.

    Surrounding the present all at the same time.

    I look down the road.

    I even see the people that may come into the moment.

    This is a gift.

    A curse sometimes.

    Cause it works and plays on my mind.

    Don't you still trust me.

    I trust you.

    I love you.

    I need you still.

    I need that.

    You felt I was special at one time.

    What can be stronger

    than me standing by you

    through all your storms.

    What can come here

    now and cause us harm.

    Give it a name.

    Call it something.

    Help me see the truth

    in what you now bring.

    My mind is clouded

    only by what you say.

    I can't focus.

    Can't you see it

    has hampered me.

    If you love me.

    If you care.

    Help me

    help us

    take us there.


    I haven't lost my gift you see.

    It staggers thru the fog.

    Haven't I brought everything

    you asked me for.

    To life before your feet.

    Why would you go

    against the grain

    and challenge to defeat.

    No controls on me.

    I give freely what is mine.

    I do believe you

    and anyone that gets

    it must deserve my time.

    I have enough of love inside.

    I never neglected you.

    Everyone knows

    what I do

    is centered

    around you too.

    So if my center

    is standing still

    and seeing

    me drown in pain.

    How can I continue

    to love you now.

    When you are

    just bringing

    sadness and pain.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa!!!! i hear music behind dis flow...

    if she dont change it
    will be hard but fight it
    and you will heal....
    but dont let no one steal
    your joy...if she cant understand
    explain it again...
    just dont let her steal the joy you have
    inside of lovin and sharin with another....
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hold up !
    dis was str8 emotional
    and to the point she gotta hear u
    tyte flow
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HODEE..........you explore the "?" of Love itself

    Loves knocking....the love within you is still aching, searching...reaching

    when love does this...it often reminds me of a house of mirrors

    and I become completely lost inside...

    Emotively, engaging piece...
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee,

    Look very deeply inside yourself, if you have to ask these questions
    Then is it really worth answering?
    Think about it.
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what!!! who would do that to a brotha like you :( mmmhmm the many injustices in this world may you heal baby
     
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