Black Poetry : somebody asked me...(again!)repost

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  1. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    somebody asked me...

    to get freaky with da rhyme
    should I oblidge?
    and take it like it's mine
    grab it from behind and squeeze
    ever so gently...

    should I caress with tender touch
    the flow til they scream "Enough!"
    and go down deep, hittin tha point
    of satisfaction
    should I persist until I inflict
    a chemical reaction?

    should I lick around tha tip
    of the message
    and grip it, holding firm
    till the essence
    pours from within?

    and is it sin...

    should I instead
    take the head of the topic
    and place it in my garden
    to stop it
    from shaking and shivering
    quivering with pleasure
    from the measure of learning
    I provide...
    or should I keep it yearning?

    perhaps I will steadily
    pick up the pace
    readily, intensely state
    that I am "all you need,
    and all you breathe,
    all you'll feed upon,
    and all you fein"
    my dreams are all in thee
    and I see Me in you
    You see it too...

    I ain't gotta pimp da freak
    to speak true to da heart
    cuz my mind is my most sacred part!

    (forgive me! these free-flows pouring out of me like mental orgasms yo...lol )
    S.Z.Divine 2001
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmmmmmm...

    Keeping it hot hugh!
    Tyte scribe!:toast:
     
  3. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oooo,
    Write the words Poet....write the words!

    BE
     
  4. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sistah...

    HOT doesn't
    seem to do this piece
    any justice
    (I knew yo *** was
    nasty :lol: ).
    Seriously girlie,
    now this is
    real sticky...
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twofish

    Go on gurl & do da **** thang then!! :D


    Lovedid it! N2
     
  6. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok

    fish. i feel ya flo.
    and i like the way u rock'd
    it.

    lookin forward to continuallyreadin u.
    thanx.

    hw
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twofish

    This piece is too badd. :toast:

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  8. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    I appreciate all of you my friends and fellow poets!
    1luv
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyght! yes, indeed...it is. i'm lovin' it!
     
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