Black Poetry : Some Women Got It And Some Just Fake It!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know how some women draw men like honey.
    Men with and without money.
    Vying for attention, no matter what the cost.
    Even when they know their dyck is being the boss.
    Some women have this thing about them that makes
    a man act a fool.
    When even with his best effort he is trying to act so
    cool.

    Some women got it and some just fake it.
    That's what they say "Fake it til you make it".
    Fantasy lovers , and unhealthy relationships
    that are good one day and lousy the next.
    And hating on the sister's that seem to always
    get the best. Holding men hostage with babies
    and such.
    These women I feel are not working with much.

    Some women got it and some just fake it.
    And if they don't get what they want they
    just up and take it.
    Another woman's man, another woman's
    style. Spitting venom on their sisters and
    always something vile.

    Some women just got that sweetness by nature.
    They treat everyone like someone special and
    don't have to try real hard. And then the ones
    who fake it...and never let down their guard.
    They take and they take and never really give.
    The exist on fantasy and never really live.

    Some women got it and some just fake it.
    From their worn out weave to their press
    on nails. Often even giving out fake orgasmic
    wails. Making a man think they love them
    while all the time it's a game. Not even giving
    a ****, and half of them they can't remember
    their name.

    I wonder about these women as I know where
    I fit in. What made them turn so salty, and as
    guilty as sin. Some women got it and some just
    fake it. Some women give love...
    and
    some
    just
    take it!

    BJS(C)2002
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feelin' this piece.
    people going through life
    acting/faking, keepin the
    facade going. always on guard,
    so the real them don't slip out.
    Sad, huh?

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHO YOU RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DAYUM it's just the truth anyhow POET!!!!!!!

    Shade
     
  4. Amun-Ra

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    OOOwee!

    You said that and I liked every word of it--some women do exactly what you say and the sad thing is--they are playing themselves because in the end they lose--thanks for the words and flow--Amun-Ra

    :)
     
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    Girl I'm gonna raise your offering, cause you just straight PREACHED up in here!!!!!

    passing the plate around.....
     
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    I always feel so **** intimadated by all the talented people here, but here goes anyway. You, young lady, strum the chords of my heart, making me think about things I would rather ignore. You have my attention what will you do? Probably make this fool fall and come unglued. Thank you. You are one very rich and classy lady.
     
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    I like it I like it
     
  8. honeebrownsuga

    honeebrownsuga Active Member MEMBER

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    I feel you girl. You ain't said a **** thing wrong!!

    Thank u 4 sharing. ;-)
     
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    THANK YOU FAMILY!

    You know you all have shown me some unspeakable love lately, And I thank you from the bottom of my heart, encouraging words fill my spirit and increase my poetic flow and though I am not here often anymore, I will forever share my flow with those who know! Thank you for helping me to grow...even when I get in Diva mode!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!:kiss:
     
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    tell da truth sistah gurl .......smack down !!!
     
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