Black Poetry : Some True Stuff

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some True Stuff

    Peeking above heads like clouds and loud thunder hot
    Like the strikes of lightning I’m fighting the weather
    And writing forever, exciting to see girls dressed in leather
    Too many trash fakes they like ash cake born a misled savage
    Eating cornbread and cabbage, adorn the color red in marriage
    So here comes the bride while MC’S got dumb pride and no rhymes
    Cats in the lab with whack minds writing abstract rhymes botom line
    Yall need help with your concept don’t step to me with rotten ascinine
    Verses, yall slop fake and tough like chopped steak cooked wrong, shook
    Domes and loosen dentures produding adventure like Steven King hooked
    On suspense, crook and dense like bent copper wire this is proper fire
    For microphones leaving psycho in homes like Norman Bates for hire
    life is a dumb circus but serves some purpose and sometime it require
    you be blind by fun can’t see the facts of reality then you back to the fatality
    Of making mistakes,
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    realism life and stuff dat goes on ...who will really know !
    fat scribe fo real bruh!
     
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    Everyone has their own slant to a story, just gotta roll with what's real to you.
     
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    thanks for the props for real yall
     
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