Black Poetry : Some Servant to God

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    work horse
    for the universe
    a driving force
    held together
    like popsicle sticks
    waiting to be crushed
    at the hart of me


    forever
    ushers in eternity
    with banners
    and gibberish
    for you

    little sacrosanct
    sacrament
    fed for the better
    whether or not
    hunger is imminent
    knowledge exist
    somewhere in the midst
    of all these morrows.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    morrows indeed this was fly !!!
    tyte write poet
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was like a poisonous dart shot at close range sista....****!....ur choice of words to describe was golden......nice nice,peice..peace
     
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    re:servant

    This poem is well written.
     
  5. bestcomesfirst

    bestcomesfirst New Member MEMBER

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    i worte this !!!


    I appreciate the comments and believe me I’m flattered by plagiarists. however, i am the writer of this piece. check and see http://leemomient.com . or do a search on yahoo for "some servant to god" or "lee momient"
     
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    welcome bestcomesfirst to destee.com as i look into this and clearly see
    the artist name and year ...not sure why BlatinaPoet4u but thank you for bringing
    it to our attention as we shift through it .....

    we will address our attention to this matter , we do not allow such
    to take place here without written permission from the artist so for
    now i am removing this poem from the public eye and all action will
    be taken again thank you for the awareness of such happening .

    $R ......Forum Moderator & Friend
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    FAMILY / POET'S WE MAY HAVE A PROBLEM here .....


    welcome Bestcomesfirst to destee.com poetic playground
    and for joining us in the community of love, peace & respect

    We also thank you for sharing this infomation which we wasn't
    aware or held no knowledge of that such had taken place

    in the future you can address any violations / issues or concerns at
    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7937

    surely we will respond or address it in a timely manner again thank you.


    BlatinaPoet4u can you please respond to this accusation set forth
    by letting us know if this your work or someone else added to the
    page so we can clear this us please respond


    Thank you in Advance
    Forum Moderator
    $$RICH$$
     
  8. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this poem it speaks volumes to me.
    Welcome to the family Bestcomesfirst.
    In the spirit of fairness I must say poetry is and has always been
    about love and RESPECT
    Let's respect each artist here and everywhere else
    You can't help growth by stunting it
    And there is enough poetic beauty to go around
    SO let's keep the melting pot of poetic beauty goin' on strong
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in all fairness we just like to hear from Blatinapoet4u
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As well the rest of us would also like to here what blatinapoet4u has to say in her own defense. I hpoe if she reads this she understands that we all just want to know what's goin' on.
     
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