Black Poetry : Some Punchlines

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some Punchlines

    Don’t have a college plan and born in garbage can your
    Rhymes are trash and lines don’t thrash paper I ignore
    Simplicity no electricity and your publicity make a wig sore
    I have the streets clench while you have a weak bench
    You can’t win games with the score of a whore or wench
    You a toad went down a road bent ended up in the wrong place
    Home a disgrace so clean it up and your girl got on lace
    Your name don’t ring a bell your bling fell on the ground
    Pick it up you a sick duck, whack and you smoke crack clown
    Not strong and deft belong on a shelf like old books
    Your pages dusty and rusty nothing left got your goals shook
    Don’t know the fate of this creature not one great feature
    A ballistic *** savage with statistics below average not a teacher
    In rap your slow wisdom is all criticism with no rhythm
    You sick and unstable like bad picnic tables your legs
    About to fall off your clout is all soft ***** should beg
    Me not to rip him your script dim and lips trimmed
    In chapstick look I rap sick and stay hipped above the rim
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word !!!!
    tyte lyrical maze of display
    flow on bruh
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was hot but check this out:

    Take my wife... please.
     
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    Yeah, that's nice, but peep this.

    Simple minded cats that think they rip mics with preschool type raps...
    Go back 2 the drawing board cuz what U drop is actually quite wack.
    I'll give U a mind slap/Rewind that/Before U step outta line blak
    Understand that your nursery rhymes R runnin' out of time, jack.
    Disrespectin' others pieces/If I saw U face 2 face I'd lay hands on U like Jesus,
    Cuz the only people that act like U do R strippers laced in sequens.
    If U believe in your skills U wouldn't act so [email protected] ill...
    Look, I'm doin' like Maddrapper, spittin' garbage behind this man's quill. (That's a pen, since I doubt U have the mental capacity 2 understand what that is.)

    Forgive me y'all, he done hit a nerve.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEY MINDSET ITS ABOUT TIME YOU GET GHETTO UP IN HERE **** I READ ABOUT DREAM **** ALL THE TIME AND IGNORED WHEN I PUT SOME REALITY IN THIS **** PIECE SO NOT MAD AT YA DO YOUR THING
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEAY YALL POET,RICH AND MINDSET THANKS FOR THE PROPS I'VE ACCOMPLISH MY MISSION OUT TO WAKE CATS UP STOP SLEEPING YALL WAKE THE **** UP LIKE MINDSET DONE HELL IT'SA NEW YEAR AND RAPPERS INTO POLITICS AND EVERYWHERE ELSE CAN'T DREAM AND GET YOUR POINT ACROSS
     
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    Madd, I do defintely apologize from my everything 4 the negative way I reacted towards your attempt 2 "wake us up", but please overstand, the way individuals deal with certain situations should be accepted because it is their opinion.

    I do my thing how I do it cuz I'm completely dissatisfied with current situations, such as our treatment of each other in the blak community, the way our youth R (or aren't) acting, the war in Iraq, the Presidency that was snatched...the list goes on & on. Now some cats would rather not speak about these things, like U, but does that necessarily mean they R sleeping?


    Now as far as my getting Ghetto, I will always be Ghetto, even though I choose 2 carry myself with a different air. Being Ghetto doesn't mean spitting on someone's piece, cuz that's what it seemed like U did, remember that cat Spit who threw up on cat's pieces in Beat Street.(I think)

    Once again, Bro. Madd, I apologize. Hopefully in the future,if U want 2 try 2 wake people up, do it in a way that is acceptable, write a rhyme.

    Peace.
     
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