Black Poetry : Some Kind Of Emotion

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, Jul 5, 2005.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :insane: in the brain tryin' to figure
    How suddenly all these emotion came out
    I remember seeing your smile
    And then everything changed
    I saw the day I would marry you
    I saw the beautiful children I'd carry for you
    I saw the life I swore I could never ever have

    Some kind of emotion
    Bursting from my soul
    A different kind of love
    That reached out and took hold
    Pain fear anger frustration
    And finally love
    It feels like God sent tears of joy
    from above for this
    New kind of love

    I saw you lighting the path for a life
    So full of positive energy
    So pure it must be right
    joy and laughter
    crying and tears
    So many emotions we would share through the years
    I saw a future paved for us

    Some kind of emotion
    Bursting from my soul
    A different kind of love
    That reached out and took hold
    Pain fear anger frustration
    And finally love
    It feels like God sent tears of joy
    From above for this
    New kind of love

    And a love carved in stone
    this vision was so real
    I knew it couldn't be wrong
    And yes I vow to tell
    It everywhere I go
    I found a love so brilliant
    And emotional

    Some kind of emotion
    bursting from my soul
    A different kind of love
    That reached out and took hold
    Pain fear anger frustration
    And finally love
    It feels like God sent us tears of joy
    from above for this
    New kind of love
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A burst of love such as this sounds heaven sent, something to cherish. Your flow made me smile poet.
     
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    UrbanPoet Active Member MEMBER

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    all i have so say best friend is. hmm?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what u felt is real
    from the heart of thrillz
    a new love wave what
    a woman soul craves
    bringing a vision so sweet
    one that will sweep u off
    ya feet and deep inside
    rest caress from da love
    new confess one that is
    strong yet mild to forever
    give u smiles is the joy
    of tears from da heavens

    this was st8 awesome i have to flow wow ! ya feeling da moment of love
    past pain and dismay past the anger and misguided structure to a new
    feeling and it's visional love
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely that you like this so much watz. I thank you again for supportin my talents

    Urbanpoet aka best friend this is just me talking about something that came to mind when I met your friend "you know who that is"

    And finally Rich I love the fact that you could add to this piece I couldn't think of anything else i could say but I think you added the perfect touch. I just hope all my searching isn't in vain. I pray there is a real love out there that I can share my visions hopes and dreams with.

    And to everyone I'm working on becoming a premium member so you can all talk to me and get to know the real me first hand.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    some kind...?
    rich explosive energy
    bursting..
    flowing nice
    thats the kind...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely when in the path of goodness and loyal to self
    true love blooms & blossome i know it's not in vain
    and the very pure love awaits you continue upward for he's there
    or already have eyes for you watching you loning for you
    your search is not in vain...... some kind of wonderful
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the confidence booster it was a much needed help.
     
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    likewise love lurks u and need u , be ready when it knocks
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I strive to be every day of my life. I've learn it's easier said than done.
     
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