Black Poetry : Some Call it Staring... - Dúbb'l you T

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by waynethomas, Dec 8, 2007.

  1. waynethomas

    waynethomas Active Member MEMBER

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    I am a man whose requirements are simple...
    So when I see someone that's
    Beautifully described as
    'Simply effective',
    I will observe them.

    Call it staring
    But I will always call it cautious observing,
    Because I'm taking it all in
    To see if you are,
    From your heart,
    Someone that's
    Truly genuine.

    And while I casually gaze
    Analyzing your current situation,
    I'm looking to see if you're
    Genuinely taking in his mumblings.

    Seeing if your
    Laugh towards him
    Is genuinely as a result of his verbal entertaining,
    Or directed towards his external clothing.

    But my quest also allows me to
    Take in how
    Your vibe is genuine.

    How your skin...
    Has not given into the
    Artificial layering
    That the worlds commercial up bringing
    Tries to mask my Queens in.

    How your hair...
    Genuinely compliments my word
    Which means
    A Nilo-Saharan language spoken in Sudan -
    Nubian -
    With not interferences of
    Western diluting.

    And if your stare...,
    Towards me,
    Heard in between laughs,
    Your glances between
    Pauses only noticeable to
    Someone waiting for the delay,
    Are genuine for me to hold...

    But
    This story to you
    Will be another one of nights moment untold,
    Because
    Seeing how you entered
    Those 11 digits -
    Correctly -
    Was confirming
    Continuing your communication
    To another location.

    So I'm forced to direct away my intentions
    And find another to focus my attention,
    The night yet a babe
    And as fulfillment of my prediction,
    Another Nubian is in view for my minds stimulation.

    I am a man whose requirements are simple...
    So when I see someone that's
    Beautifully described as
    'Simply effective',
    I will observe them.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I found this write to be quite warm, and constructed in intricate layers. I admired the way you detailed exactly why a particular lady draws you in. Perhaps it's not really staring... Wonderful scribe.
     
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    endearing of a heart as one look deep into the outter parts to see da inner
    parts of her soul this was very nice and sweet
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    waynethomas:
    "Simply Effective"...huh...
    I'm feeling this joint.


    Much Luv
     
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    Hey waynethomas
    Indeed you aren’t one to dabble.
    It’s seem like your poem speaks of
    A natural woman. Very nice and enjoyable read,

    Peace~N~Love
     
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