Black Poetry : Some body stop him!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jul 29, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ring the bell,
    Blow the horn.
    Crowd around my friends.
    If you want to know the tale, of predatory man.

    He eats you up, he spits you out.
    He ravages your home and land.
    These are a few traits
    I must relate of predatory man.

    Murder is his friendship.
    Crippling is his touch.
    Denying you your dignity, justice for desert.

    Best you run.
    Try to hide.
    If your foolish don't stand.
    Don't get involved.
    Get away that predatory man.

    Although he has the power.
    He even brings the pain.

    There is a weakness that takes him down the predatory man.
    It's love of a woman.
    It's love that he needs.

    She can be as cold , or gentle.
    You never know his liking.
    You will never know his kind.

    You can't begin to think like him .. his tired and twisted mind.
    So since I know his weakness.
    I implore you ladies please.
    Bring the predatory man.

    Down.

    Bring him to his knees.

    He will listen to your whispers.
    He doesn't understand your tears.
    He's been this way for centuries.
    Hundreds of years.

    Be careful if you take this path of changing warm his heart.
    He's predator man.

    I thank you.
    The children need a start.

    No more drugs, No more thugs.
    No more bullet rain.
    No more broken homes for them.
    No more killing pain.
    Thank you ladies.

    It's not selfish you see, to ask you for your help.
    See predator man would see thru my plan.
    He's weak to your sweet stealth.


    If you want some changes.
    If you want some piece.
    It's up to you to conquer what the nation has help increase.
    From top to the bottom they are all corrupt.
    They drink of us like wine.
    But only the love of a woman
    can change the criminal mind.
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: :hot: :hot: I can't say anything else
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow....wonderful....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my i've heard dis time before
    and what a woman has in stor
    i've been told of such mind
    da man of twist so y'all are u
    receiving dis masterful mix
    wow! u laid out a piece of da
    dark side
     
  5. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I crossed over by mistake. Thurday... I'm unemployed. Temporary I hope... This economy is dark. I'm being optimistic.. but skirting the edge of the dark side.
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee, this flow was phenomenal................loved it.
    The depth of this message..........hmmm, leave you in thought.
    And you are soooooo right about the love of a woman,
    if it can bring down empires........... no question,
    it can change a criminal mind!

    Much luv,
    Angelic
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Interesting write!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow HODEE
    the power of love
    can help make a change
    Peace
     
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